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發帖人 主題標題: | But You Didn't --- 但是,你沒有 回覆數: 2 點數: 819 | 第 1 樓 |
時間:2005-00-28 12:52 | ||
But You Didn't --- 但是,你沒有 摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-28 12:52 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl 大家好! ... 一首好詩分享!珍惜人生,很多事都要即時把握。 ...... 別忘了,回文交流您的心得,大家一起分享。 ...... 當然,中英文都可以。不過,這是英文詩苑, ...... 我們希望您能開始交流英語 .... 不急,等您! [color=green:e47a4405a2] ***** ...................[/color:e47a4405a2] [b:e47a4405a2][color=red:e47a4405a2][i:e47a4405a2][size=24:e47a4405a2]祝福[/size:e47a4405a2][/i:e47a4405a2][/color:e47a4405a2][/b:e47a4405a2] [color=green:e47a4405a2]................... ***** [/color:e47a4405a2] ..... [b:e47a4405a2][color=blue:e47a4405a2]BUT YOU DIDN'T[/color:e47a4405a2][/b:e47a4405a2] I looked at you the other day I thought you'd see me but you didn't I said "I love you" and waited for what you would say I thought you'd hear me but you didn't I asked you to come outside and play ball with me I thought you'd follow me but you didn't I drew a picture just for you to see I thought you'd save it but you didn't I made a fort for us back in the woods I thought you'd camp with me but you didn't I found some worms 'n such for fishing if we could I thought you'd want to go but you didn't I needed you just to talk to, my thoughts to share I thought you'd want to but you didn't I told you about the game hoping you'd be there I thought you'd surely come but you didn't I asked you to share my youth with me I thought you'd want to but you couldn't My country called me to war, you asked me to come home safely [b:e47a4405a2][color=blue:e47a4405a2]But I didn't[/color:e47a4405a2][/b:e47a4405a2]. [b:e47a4405a2]Stan Gebhardt [/b:e47a4405a2] .................................................................................................................... 這首詩是 Mike Open 得獎作品之一,從 You didn't 到 I didn't, 我覺得它的情緒帶動的很好, 尤其是最後的一句,讓人好像胸口被打了一記,令人.... 想哭 .... 讀完這首詩的感覺 ... 千萬別說 ...... 來不及 ....... ................. [color=blue:e47a4405a2]一念之間,可以改變很多事,人生是可以少點遺憾的[/color:e47a4405a2] ................. ........[b:e47a4405a2] You didn't, I didn't. [/b:e47a4405a2]......... [color=blue:e47a4405a2][b:e47a4405a2]You did it, I did it.[/b:e47a4405a2] [/color:e47a4405a2]... [color=red:e47a4405a2][b:e47a4405a2]You do it, I do it. [/b:e47a4405a2][/color:e47a4405a2].......... ........................... 從黑白到[color=Red:e47a4405a2][b:e47a4405a2]彩色[/b:e47a4405a2][/color:e47a4405a2],只有鼠標[color=Blue:e47a4405a2][b:e47a4405a2]一點[/b:e47a4405a2][/color:e47a4405a2]的距離 ......................... [color=blue:e47a4405a2]詩苑心語 1[/color:e47a4405a2] ....... :arrow: 天下文壇 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-28 12:52 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl |
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回覆: | 可是,我 ..... 來不及 | 第 2 樓 |
時間:2005-00-28 13:31 | ||
可是,我 ..... 來不及 摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-28 13:31 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl [color=blue:4464f1ebbf][b:4464f1ebbf].... 可是,我 ... 來不及 ......[/b:4464f1ebbf][/color:4464f1ebbf] 那天,我看著你, 以為你會看看我,可是,你─ 沒有。 我說我愛你,然後等著你說些什麼 …… 以為你會聽我說,可是,你─ 沒有。 我請你到外邊來和我一起玩球, 以為你會跟我走,可是,你─ 沒有。 我為你畫了一幅畫,就只為你, 以為你會收起來,可是,你─ 沒有。 在後面的林子裡,為你弄好營地, 以為你肯和我一起露營,可是,你─ 沒興趣。 我找到了蟲可以做餌,如果我們能去釣魚, 以為你會想去,可是,你─ 不提。 只想要你跟我說說話,分享我的想法, 以為你會願意,但是,你不稀奇。 我告訴你比賽的日期,希望你會去, 以為你一定會來,但是,沒看到你。 要求你和我分享成長的青春氣息, 以為你會想跟我在一起,你卻無能為力。 我的國家徵召我加入戰爭服役, 你叮嚀我,要我─ 平安歸去, [color=blue:4464f1ebbf]可是─ 我 … 來不及 …… [/color:4464f1ebbf] ........ 要你─ 想要和你分享我的青春氣息, 以為你會想跟我在一起,但是,你不願意。 我的國家徵召我加入戰爭服役, 你叮嚀我,要我─ 平安歸去, [color=Blue:4464f1ebbf]可是─ 我 … 來不及 ……[/color:4464f1ebbf] .... [color=green:4464f1ebbf]中文翻譯:畢泠[/color:4464f1ebbf] ...... :cry: 最後一句,可以用 .... 但是,我 ... 沒有回去 .... 我喜歡 .... 來不及 .... 的語氣,淡淡的,卻無限悲慼 ..... .... 您自己也試試翻譯,感覺一下 .... :arrow: 天下文壇 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-28 13:31 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl |
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時間:2005-00-30 03:49 | ||
摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-30 03:49 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl 此文亦轉貼至瀟湘夜雨文學社區之英語園地交流,此連結為該文主題頁,歡迎點閱瀏覽、交流。 http://www.xxyy2004.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=8363 :arrow: 天下文壇 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-00-30 03:49 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl |
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