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發帖人 主題標題: | * 無眠隨想‧漫‧Thought of Sleeplessness -1 回覆數: 2 點數: 782 | 第 1 樓 |
時間:2005-05-09 04:54 | ||
* 無眠隨想‧漫‧Thought of Sleeplessness -1 摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-05-09 04:54 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl * 無眠隨想‧漫‧Thought of Sleeplessness ~ 1 [url=http://www.xxyy2004.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=9421][color=Purple]* □→ 飛翔‧夢向故鄉‧組曲[/color][/url] * A thought of Sleeplessness Sleeplessness is a habit of gutless. When you feel blue and hopeless, You hide yourself from loneliness. [color=Blue]Sleeplessness is wonder of myth. When you dream with open eyes. Hollow of heart will be filled with. Lonesome souls will not amortize[/color]. [color=green]Ups and downs wear off ambitiousness. The struggle of prosperous is dimness, The lonely nights are long and endless.[/color] * 無眠隨想‧漫 無眠 是一種習慣 不想面對 無奈孤單 無眠 是睜眼的夢幻 寂寞的心被釋放 等待填滿 滄桑 在掙扎裡昏暗 夜孤寂 漫漫 * .......................................................................... 一些說明供參考: 1) 上面的,考慮到尾韻,以及個人偏好句子一樣的長短。 2) 我喜歡 .... released,可惜尾韻押不上。 3) Aglow, Escrow (ego), Hollow 另外的尾韻。 4) Life with adventuress 也是一種寫法. [color=Blue]Sleeplessness is wonder of myth. When you dream with open eyes. The lonely soul is being released, And is expecting to be filled with.[/color] Ups and downs, Life with adventuress. The struggle of prosperous is dimness, The lonely nights are long and endless. [color=green]Blue is dullness of aglow. When you struggle for your own escrow. (Ego) The night is long and endless of hollow[/color] ……………………………………………………………… * 以下,為原來比較簡潔式的寫法,句子長短不一, 以 blue 表達滄桑,兩種尾韻。 Sleeplessness is a habit of gutless. When you feel blue and hopeless, Hiding yourself away from loneliness. Sleeplessness is a myth. When you dream with open eyes. The lonesome soul is being released and waiting to be filled with. Sleeplessness is a myth. When you dream with open eyes. The hollows of hearts will be filled with. The lonesome souls no longer amortize. [color=blue]Blue is aglow of dullness. The struggle of life leads to dimness. The night is lonely and endless.[/color] [color=blue]Blue is dullness of aglow. When you struggle for your escrow. (Ego) The night is long and hollow.[/color] * 天下文壇 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-05-09 04:54 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl |
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回覆: | 小花至愛詞長貼文 | 第 2 樓 |
時間:2005-05-09 04:57 | ||
小花至愛詞長貼文 摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-05-09 04:57 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl 小花至愛 文壇新星 註冊時間: 2005-04-22 文章: 45 來自: 樂昌、章臺 金幣 134 [ 贈與貨幣 ] 發表於: 星期一 五月 02, 2005 4:11 am 文章主題: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 多謝發表 請問是中轉英, 英轉中, 還是一並創作... 另是否歡迎旁人善意改動, 一同研集 _________________ 花曾語我: [color=008000]今生我倆有緣無份,來世定要風雨同舟。[/color] [color=0000ff]「舊愛如花花易逝,前情似水水難留。」[/color] 天下文壇 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-05-09 04:57 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl |
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回覆: | 歡迎 小花至愛 光臨! | 第 3 樓 |
時間:2005-05-09 04:58 | ||
歡迎 小花至愛 光臨! 摘自 天下文壇 畢泠 2005-05-09 04:58 http://yuhsia.com/ccb/index.pl 歡迎 [size=3][b]小花至愛 [/b][/size]光臨! [img]http://www.4uup.com/bbs/attachments/forumid_8/wc_khjbXmz0ZcwX.gif[/img] 這是拙作,歡迎提出您的建議,一起討論。
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